Review: Beautiful Surrender (Forever #3) by Priscilla West

beautiful surrenderTitle: Beautiful Surrender
Author: Priscilla West
Series: Forever #3
Rating: 3.75 stars
Genres: Contemporary Romance
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Blurb:
“What gives you a thrill Kristen?”

The conclusion to the Surrender Series by Priscilla West.

No one is who they seem to be.

Kristen let Vincent into her heart because he seemed so different from everyone in her conservative world of wealth management. She thought they shared something special, but when she realizes that Vincent has been playing her the entire time, her heart is crushed.

As Kristen’s relationship with Vincent reaches a crisis point, a man from Kristen’s past returns looking for a second chance. Is her ex-boyfriend really looking for redemption or is his goal something more sinister?

Kristen struggles to hold herself together, until she discovers a revelation that will change everything.

My Review:
Actual Rating: 3.75 Stars

This was the best book of the series and finally we saw some real suspense, some gritty action. I had a much better sense of both characters in this book though I have to say that I warmed to Vincent much more than Kristen.

Kristen flies off the handle with Vincent when she discovers what he’s done. I didn’t understand her reaction and it wasn’t natural in my view, all he was doing was trying to protect her and she freaked-out.

Marty is a very disturbed boy and the scenes at the end were explosive.

Now that I’ve read all three books I’m feeling a little frustrated because I think this series could be really great with a little bit more fleshing out and stronger plot development. For me, this story lacked originality: Everything that happens is predictable and apart from the romance there isn’t much else happening. Even the sub-plot centering around Marty could have been woven more intricately throughout the story so that he really felt like a threat. He only felt like that at the very end. I think there was a missed plot opportunity with Richard, and excepting Gizelle and her family, none of the side characters added any value to the plot. They should have been expanded on or removed.

Though this might sound like a contradiction, I did still enjoy reading this series, but I was frustrated at the wasted potential because Priscilla West is clearly a talented writer and I admire her writing style. I am definitely going to check out some of her other books.

With stronger structural/developmental editing this series could be so much better. I also think that this would work better as one larger book. While I know it’s trendy to serialise in shorter segments, I just didn’t feel like it worked here.

I received a review copy of this book via Netgalley in exchange for my honest review.

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