If you don’t give your heart away, you can’t get it broken.
When twenty-year-old Kendall Jordan transfers across the country to Garrison University, the last thing she’s looking for is a one-night stand. Unfortunately that’s exactly what gorgeous Cruise Elton offers. Kendall has long since come to realize that love is an illusion, and Cruise couldn’t agree more, but something deep inside her wants him all for herself. So Kendall devises a plan to ‘play the player’ and proposes that Cruise tutor her in becoming a female version of himself, Garrison University’s own playboy. But as real feelings emerge, the game gets complicated, and Kendall and Cruise will find themselves questioning everything they thought they knew about love.
A New York Times and USA Today Bestseller
New Adult – Contemporary Romance *Intended for mature audiences 17+* Sexual situations
Addison Moore is one of my favorite authors, and I love her Beautiful Oblivion series, and I’ve also enjoyed her 3AM Kisses series. So, it pains me to have to rate one of her books a 3 star, but this one just didn’t hit the mark for me.
I can’t say I didn’t enjoy reading it – because I did – but there were issues with the plot and the writing that impacted my enjoyment.
Kendall has just moved from California to Massachusetts, and she’s attending a new college. Her mom’s oldest friend (Aunt Jackie) has a son, Pennington, at the same college, and he’s supposed to be looking out for her. When she meets him, it’s clear he is going to be of no help to her. Penn is a stoner who has done nothing to sort out her accomodation as he promised, so she finds herself homeless on her first night in a new state.
Cruise Elton makes a beeline for Kendall the minute he spots her. A notorious player, she pegs him for what he is instantly, and kicks him to the curb. Only to go home with him a few minutes later given that she’s homeless. As you do. Shack up with a total stranger, who ten minutes ago you were deflecting because you knew he was only after sex.
I could forgive that though, as the first half of the book was sweet and funny to read. But after that there were so many plot holes that I became frustrated with Kendall (Kenny) and the author. Blair is the villian of the piece. She is Cruise’s nasty ex-fiancee out to cause trouble. Kenny is presented as a smart sassy girl but she seems to lose all her brain cells when it comes to Blair and I wanted to reach into my Kindle and bang her head against the wall. Not only that, her supposed friends Lauren and Ally, see her acting friendly towards Blair on at least two occasions, and neither of them think to warn her about the bitch? Not believable.
Cruise is aware that Blair is back in town and trying to worm her way back into his affections, but even he doesn’t warn Kenny. Then there was an issue with Cal, Cruise’s best friend. Lauren is afraid her boyfriend (Cal) is cheating so she engages naive Kenny to flirt with her man’s BF to try to lure him into cheating. None of them talk to the other about it, and Ally doesn’t tell her that Cruise showed up in the cafe with flowers for her and saw her flirting up a storm with Cal? Come on? Seriously? There were just far too many plot holes for me to overlook and I became very frustrated by the end of the book.
Which is a shame, because it still has a lot going for it. Cruise is much more than what we are led to believe, and I loved his character, and how it developed gradually. If Kendall had been written consistently I would have been more enamoured with her. But she was smart once minute and dumb as a box of nails the next.
There’s plenty of hot steamy sex in this one, balanced with sweet romance. I liked that, and how patient Cruise was in waiting for Kenny to be ready.
Now I need to address the writing. Addison is an amazing writer and I’ve loved all her other books, but it’s like she was trying a different style in this book, and I don’t think she pulled it off. Parts of it were beautifully written, almost poetic, but other parts were trying too hard, and it was jarring to read, and it pulled me out of the story. It was overly descriptive at times and I found myself skimming those sections.
I’m going to read the next book to see if I like it any better, but if there are the same issues then I won’t be continuing this series. I have the first couple of books in her Celestra series on my Kindle and I’m dying to read those.
All in all, this is a decent enough read, but not up to Addison’s ususal superb standard. If you can overcome some glaring plotholes and suspend belief then you will enjoy Someone to Love.