Review: Forbidden Surrender (Forever #1) by Priscilla West

Forbidden SurrenderTitle: Forbidden Surrender
Author: Priscilla West
Series: Forever #1
Rating: 3 stars
Genres: Contemporary Romance
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Blurb:
“What gives you a thrill Kristen?”

The minute I saw Vincent Sorenson, I knew he was trouble. Billionaire. Bad boy. And dangerously sexy. He was everything I craved, and nothing I needed.

Unfortunately, I couldn’t just avoid him. The higher ups at my company decided they needed his business, and I was on the team to bring him in. Vincent Sorenson didn’t seem as interested in business as he was in me, but I knew that was a door better left unopened. If I got involved with him, it would only unearth the pain I spent years trying to bury.

I thought I had it under control, but I seriously underestimated Vincent’s seductive charm and silver-tongue. I would soon find out how delicious it would feel to let myself fall into this forbidden surrender.

My Review:
I liked this book, but I didn’t love it.

I enjoyed the writing style and the book flowed smoothly, but it was too short and there wasn’t adequate time to really connect with the two mains.

Kristen was initially presented as risk-averse, sensible, a bit boring, and quite condescending when she first met Vincent. However, her character was inconsistent and she suddenly became aloof, fiesty, and then she totally folded on the second date. As you do.

Vincent actually seemed like a decent enough guy, if a bit overpowering at times.

Kristen’s work colleague, Richard, has slime-ball potential written all over him.

The romance happened too fast – there wasn’t enough build up – and the whole plot felt a bit rushed. For me, it lacked depth and substance.

However, I’m engaged enough to continue the series and I’m hoping the character development is stronger in Book 2.

I received a review copy of this book via Netgalley in exchange for my honest opinion.

Blog Tour: His Witch to Keep (Keepers of the Veil #2) by Zoe Forward

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Today is my stop during the blog tour for His Witch to Keep (Keepers of the Veil #2) by Zoe Forward. I’ll share my review with you today and there’s a tour wide giveaway!

His_Witch_To_Keep_500Title: His Witch to Keep
Author: Zoe Forward
Series: Keepers of the Veil #2
Rating: 4.5 stars
Genres: Paranormal Romance
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Blurb:
Wanting her was one thing. Keeping her was another…

Serenity Danssaert was already in way over her head. Not even her MI6 training or her powers as one of the seven Pleiades witches is going to save her sister. Then Alexi Jovec shows up. A secret operative working for unknown forces, he’s impossibly sexy and dangerous…and the guy who bailed on Serenity after a red-hot, racy night.

So bonding to him as her destined—the One—is so very wrong.

While Alexi’s need to own Serenity—body, soul, and beyond—is nearly unbearable, it’s also forbidden. He’s the last man who could ever be her destined. Besides, Hades’s right-hand man cannot bond with a chosen Pleiades witch. He may be the one man who can protect her, but she can never be his to keep.

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My Review:
Serenity is one bad-ass ex-M16 Pleid witch with a feisty mouth to match. We were first introduced to her in the first book (Protecting His Witch) and I loved her instantly. She’s a fantastic MC and her chemistry with Alexi was smoking hot. I lurved the romance in this book.

Alexi is a death-reaper and destined for a life of solitude. But he’s been watching over Serenity for years and they share an undeniable connection. Hades may have told him he can’t have her but fate seems to think otherwise.

This book was fast-paced and well-written, with a good blend of action, mystery, fantasy, and romance. Where I felt the first book was too focused on the romance and not enough on the plot and world-building, I didn’t have the same issues here. Zoe got it bang-on this time.

Someone is trying to kill Serenity, and they have taken her sister hostage, so a large part of the story is tied up with Alexi and Serenity trying to unravel the mystery in time to save her sister. Toward the end, I started to suspect the truth, so it wasn’t completely unexpected when it was revealed, but it was still a brilliant twist.

I loved the interaction with the other witches, and the fact that we got to see Kat and Matt again. I’d still like more of the witchy-stuff, but I presume this will be developed as the series progresses.

My only complaint – and it’s minor – is that she seemed more interested in getting into Alexi’s pants than she was in finding her kidnapped sister. There was a definite lack of urgency that wasn’t realistic, but, hey, it’s a work of fiction so I can overlook it.

Overall, this was a fantastic read and I look forward to continuing this series.

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zoe_photo_webAbout the Author:
Zoe Forward is a hopeless romantic who can’t decide between paranormal and contemporary romance. So, she writes both. In addition to being a mom to one rambunctious kindergartener and wife to a conservation ecologist who plans to save all the big cats on the planet, she’s a small animal veterinarian caring for all the small furries, although there is the occasional hermit crab.

When she’s not typing at her laptop she’s tying on a karate belt for her son or cleaning up the newest pet mess from the menagerie that occupies her house. She’s madly in love with her globe trotting husband of ten years and happiest when he returns to their home base in North Carolina.

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Review: Beautiful Elixir (Beautiful Oblivion #3) by Addison Moore

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Author: Addison Moore
Series: Beautiful Oblivion #3
Rating: 5 stars
Genres: Contemporary Romance
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Blurb:
The sharper the lies, the darker the secrets…

Kennedy is mine. Too many tortured years have gone by without her, and I’m not about to let another one slip by. There’s nothing that’s going to keep us apart this time, not my psychotic family, not hers, not the tornado that’s ripping through her life or the one that’s ripping through mine.

I want to open up my heart to her, tell her everything I’ve done, but that’s the one thing I can never do. Some things in life are best left unsaid.

Caleb McCarthy is back in Loveless, turning heads, melting hearts and breaking them. We had a few sultry summers together, way back when. Those stolen nights were our treasured secret. But now he’s here, ready to take the next step with me just as my life burns to cinders. Our timing was never good. Someone has lifted the lid off Pandora’s Box and my every worst nightmare is floating around cyberspace.

All of the secrets I thought I’d take to the grave are filtering out one by one, and I need to find a way to put the lid back, to bury the box, before the darkest part of my soul is exposed—no one can know what I’ve done.

Kennedy’s every worst nightmare is coming true.

Caleb’s are just beginning.

My Review:
TEAM CALEB ALL THE WAY.

Loved this book and it was a fantastic addition to what is proving to be an excellent series.

This time we get Kennedy (Ken) and Caleb’s story. This one is a lot darker than the previous stories and filled with suspense and intrigue. It was difficult to read at first because Ken is filled with so much self-loathing and she’s really in a dark, self-destructive place.It’s not pleasant to be in her head.

Caleb and Ken had a few summer flings and both of them left a lasting impression on the other. Caleb always promised he would come back for her and now he has, and boy is he determined in his quest for the girl he’s always loved. He was completely unwavering in his commitment to Ken, even though she pushed him away and was less than honest at times. He is there for her through thick and thin and he never lets her down. Swoon 🙂

By her own admission, Ken is prone to telling lies and the tensions and suspense are well-developed as the story progresses. I did figure out the identity of the villain of the piece, and a few other things, but it had enough twists and turns to keep me on my feet.

Caleb is hiding his own secret, but it wasn’t as explosive as Ken’s. It introduced an interesting family dynamic though.

Ken’s sister Reese is in this book, along with Ace and all the other characters I’ve come to love. Reese actually grated on my nerves this time – she came across as fluffy and spineless and she was quite annoying. While I had minor irritations with her in the first book, I did warm to her character. Not so much in this book.

All in all, this was a fantastic read. Now I’m torn between Ace and Caleb – two amazing guys; great dilemma though!

I look forward to continuing this series when the next book is released.

Blog Tour: Cadence (Ruby Riot) by Lisa Swallow

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Today is my stop during the blog tour for Cadence (Ruby Riot #1) by Lisa Swallow. I’ll share my review with you today! And there’s a tour wide giveaway!

Cadence.Ebook.AmazonTitle: Cadence
Author: Lisa Swallow
Series: Ruby Riot #1
Genres: Romance
Rating: 4 stars
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Blurb:
Tegan Hughes joins Blue Phoenix and Ruby Riot on tour, and drummer Bryn isn’t the only one who notices his little sister isn’t a kid anymore.

Jax Lewis is the guitarist for Ruby Riot and the band are rising to success. He’s hot property and loving every minute of his new found fame. Now, he’s on tour supporting Blue Phoenix and living his rock star life to the full. Until Tegan walks into his world and puts the brakes on.

Tegan Hughes is taking a year out and has her sights set on touring Europe with her big brother’s band. Blue Phoenix drummer, Bryn isn’t happy when his sister arrives unannounced at his hotel in Lisbon, but Tegan isn’t the type of person to take no as an answer.

With her big brother breathing down their necks, Jax and Tegan attempt to keep a handle on their growing attraction but that proves harder than they thought. Jax is used to getting whoever and whatever he wants and after kissing Tegan once, he knows one thing…he wants more.

The problem is, Tegan isn’t rock star girlfriend material. She has ambitions of her own and refuses to let anything stand in the way of her plans. But when Jax and Tegan’s relationship becomes public knowledge life becomes a hell of a lot more complicated.

Cadence is the first standalone book in a new rock romance series, Ruby Riot. The series is a spin-off from the Blue Phoenix books but you do not need to read the Blue Phoenix series first.

My Review:
I love Lisa’s Blue Phoenix series and having only recently read Jem and Ruby’s story (which was my favorite of all the books) I was really looking forward to reading Cadence. Overall, it was a very enjoyable read and I can’t wait to read Nate and Riley’s story next.

From what I learned previously, Jax is a total man-slut but he has a heart of gold underneath that player persona. What I didn’t realize until I read Cadence is that he’s drowning in this new world that he’s been thrust into, and he doesn’t have the self-discipline required to keep on the straight and narrow. At times, he was extremely immature and way out of line, but, for the most part, I felt an urge to mollycoddle him and shower him with love.

Tegan has begged her brother Bryn to let her tour with him and he reluctantly agrees. The minute she meets Jax they form an instant connection and I just knew the sparks were going to fly. Jax’s star is ascending and he’s in hot demand. Tegan doesn’t want to be another one of his groupies so she tries her best to stay away from him. When that proves impossible, she insists that they try dating in an attempt to have a normal relationship.

As they grow closer, they often grow further apart. Both are young and relatively inexperienced, and they most definitely are not equipped with the wherewithal to deal with the intrusive press and Jax’s obsessive fan base.

While Jax is sweet and protective of Tegan, there is no ignoring his destructive side. While Tegan is falling hard for him, she worries he will bring her down. Eventually, they deal with their demons, and the obstacles to their love and they get their HEA in the end.

I really enjoy Lisa’s writing style and her last book was exceptional – her best book in my opinion. The writing in this one was not quite as good but still well executed. I felt the plot dragged a little in the second half, was quite repetitive in places, and some of the dialogue was cringeworthy.

However, it didn’t impact my overall enjoyment and I will definitely continue the series.

If you enjoy rockstar romances, you should check out Lisa’s Blue Phoenix series. Summer Sky, Book 1, is free to download and all the other books are on sale this week.

Thanks to the author and Inkslinger PR for providing an ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.

Oh, and I love that stunning cover. Beautiful.

About the Author:
Lisa is an Amazon bestselling author of contemporary and paranormal romance. She is originally from the UK and moved to Australia in 2001. She now lives in Perth, Western Australia with her husband, three children, and Weimaraner, Tilly, who often makes appearances on Lisa’s social media.

Lisa’s first publication was a moving poem about the rain, followed by a suspenseful story about shoes. Following these successes at nine years old there was a long gap in her writing career, until she published her first book in 2013.

In the past, Lisa worked as an English teacher in France, as an advertising copywriter in England, and ran her own business in Australia. Now she spends her days with imaginary rock stars.
She lived in Europe as a child and also travelled when she left university. This has given Lisa stories which would sound far-fetched if she wrote them down, and maybe one day she will. These days, Lisa is happy in her writing cave, under Tilly’s supervision.

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Review: Beautiful Illusions (Beautiful Oblivion #2) by Addison Moore

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Author: Addison Moore
Series: Beautiful Oblivion #2
Rating: 4 stars
Genres: Contemporary Romance
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Blurb:
Sometimes the past comes back to haunt you—in the most heartbreakingly beautiful way.

Gavin’s story.

I fell in love hard and fast as lightning. As quick as she came into my world she was gone. Demi said she has secrets—that she’s done horrible things. Who hasn’t? I’m not going to let the past determine our future. Sometimes love lays forever at your feet and sometimes you need to fight for it. Demi is worth every damn battle we’ll have to go through. I’d burn down the world just to keep her safe. And, after what I’ve discovered, I just might have to. All I need with Demi is one more night to convince her we’re worth it. And that one night is going to cost me everything.

My Review:
This is the second book in this series and on this occasion the story centers around Gavin and Demi. We met Gavin in the first book, but this is our first time meeting Demi.

Demi has had her fair share of knock backs in life – she has lost both her parents and had to deal with an evil stepmom and a thoroughly nasty stepbrother. She’s been on the run for the last few years and is barely treading water. She ends up in Loveless out of desperation and accidently bumps into Gavin. I think it’s fair to say it was pretty much love at first sight for both of them.

There was a good twist about 40% into this book that I didn’t see coming. Love when that happens.

This book has it all by the bucket load – hot romance, steamy sex, angst, torment, drama, betrayal, suspense, intrigue, revenge, pain, and longing.

The writing was superb and I loved both main characters and all the other side characters that made a reappearance in this book. The men in this series ( except Warren Jnr. and Snr.) are totally swoon-worthy – the obligatory movie star knock-out looks mixed with strength, compassion and an all-or-nothing type attitude when it comes to the women they love. Aw, love it! Gavin was willing to give up EVERYTHING for Demi and it was so endearing, but Ace still has my heart. 🙂

This book lost a star for me in the last quarter. I’m not sure what happened really, but it was almost as if the author ran out of time or steam at the end and just rushed it. There was a really great subplot that was totally glossed over and I felt it should have been fleshed out in greater detail. Then it got a little repetitive with both Demi and Gavin talking about love, fate, how they were brought together etc. over and over again. It had already been said on previous occasions and it was overkill, not necessary. The only other thing I didn’t like was how easily Warren appeared to be forgiven for what he did to Reese in the first book. So not cool. This is a serious subject matter and in my opinion it warranted being treated as such.

However, it was still an excellent read and I’m totally hooked on this series now.

Review: Flight (The Crescent Chronicles #1) by Alyssa Rose Ivy

FlightTitle: Flight
Author: Alyssa Rose Ivy
Series: The Crescent Chronicles #1
Rating: 2.5 stars
Genres: Paranormal Romance
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Blurb:
Sometimes you just have to take flight.

A summer in New Orleans is exactly what Allie needs before starting college. Accepting her dad’s invitation to work at his hotel offers an escape from her ex-boyfriend and the chance to spend the summer with her best friend. Meeting a guy is the last thing on her mind—until she sees Levi.

Unable to resist the infuriating yet alluring Levi, Allie finds herself at the center of a supernatural society and forced to decide between following the path she has always trusted or saving a city that might just save her.

My Review:
Actual 2.5 stars.

I was sucked in by the enticing cover and subject matter. The premise sounded great and to be fair had great potential however it was let down my some downright cringe-worthy dialogue and a lack of character and emotional development. At times I felt like I must have missed a few chapters as the relationship between Allie and Levi seemed to come out of thin air. A lot of their so called ‘relationship’ is skimmed over or we are ‘told’ certain things instead of being shown them. It felt very disjoined at times which was a shame because I liked the paranormal element and in the main the prose was decent.

Allie’s friend appeared in the book for like, two seconds, and then she was gone and apart from encouraging her to go out with Levi I struggled to see what purpose she filled. Most normal girls of her age would have been highly dubious of Levi and his friends but Allie showed no concerns. Similarly, when she finds out their big secret she barely bats an eyelid. Not natural or believable. She could at least have been allowed to freak out for a few days but she seemed to accept it far too quickly.

There was a good dose of angst and suspense when Levi’s enemy made an appearance and I enjoyed those scenes. This is another example to illustrate my frustration – the story was actually decent, it’s just the execution that let it down.

That ending would have been much more explosive if the emotional depth between the characters was on a more solid footing and I understood where Levi’s motivations lay, but it was just confusing.

A lot of books I’m reading lately are leaving me frustrated due to lack of wasted potential and this most definitely is one of those. With better developmental editing and stronger characterization this book could be exceptional. But for me it was a bit of a let-down. I won’t be continuing with the series.

Blog Tour: Burn for You (Protector #3) by Stephanie Reid

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Today is my stop during the blog tour for Burn for You (Protector #3) by Stephanie Reid . I’ll share my review with you today! And there’s a tour wide giveaway!

BurnForYou_EbookTitle: Burn for You
Author: Stephanie Reid
Series: Protector #3
Rating: 5 stars
Genres: Contemporary Romance/ suspense
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Blurb:
Vic Russo is just one of the guys. Except she’s not a guy. A paramedic, affectionately known as Vic within her firehouse, Victoria is a permanent fixture in the friend zone. But when her childhood crush, firefighter Graham McAndrew, becomes single once again, she decides enough is enough. It’s time for Graham to see her as the woman she’s become. There’s only one problem. A photo of her in the arms of another man has captured the nation’s attention.

Jason Meadows is not thrilled to have his police work interrupted by a small media craze. In fact, he’d be content never to see Victoria or that photo-gone-viral again. But a series of fires in town, paired with a growing attraction to the quirky paramedic, make staying away impossible.

Determined to ferret out a potential killer, Jason enlists Victoria’s help as his eyes and ears inside the firehouse. And while threats rise from within, Victoria is forced to choose between the love of her past and the man who’s ignited her fire within.

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My Review:
This was a fantastic read and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Burn for You is the story of Victoria and Jason. She is an ex-veteran paramedic working with the fire department, and he is a cop and newly appointed arson investigator. They cross paths through their work and an instant attraction sparks leading to a full-blown love affair. Except Jason doesn’t do relationships and he’s a pro at keeping women (and people in general) at arms length. So the path of true love is definitely not going to run smoothly for our couple. Cue plenty of emotional angst and drama, throw in a smattering of the sexy stuff, and a meaty mystery subplot, and you have the recipe for a great read!

When we first meet Vic (or Toria as Jason comes to call her) she is pining for Graham, her old on-again-off-again crush. What she has ever seen in him is beyond me. Seriously, he was a total preening idiot who thought the whole world revolved around him. I loved the scene at the end where she finally put him in his place.

I really loved how the sex didn’t overshadow the plot in this book. So many times I pick up a book where the sex completely eclipses everything else, so this was a refreshing read. Don’t get me wrong, there’s still plenty of romance and sexy scenes, but it never took away from the story.

The plot around the arsonist was solidly built and added plenty of intrigue and mystery.

Character development is really strong in this book and both mains were multi-layered. Jason, in particular, has a dark, complex past which was gradually revealed as the book progressed. My heart bled for him. I enjoyed Vic’s character – while she was sassy and independent she had a vulnerable side that she didn’t shy away from. Essentially she is a really nice person and someone who always sees the best in others. An easy MC to warm to.

It’s obvious this author has a counseling background as the character development spoke to overcoming deep-rooted anxieties and fears and dealing with past trauma. The author writes with strong emotional impact and it’s clear she has a firm grasp on human behavior, motivations, and drivers, and strategies for dealing with self-destructive traits/actions.

The writing style is very good and consistent with the genre. Pacing is spot-on, and I also really enjoyed the worldbuilding.

While this is part of a series it is a standalone read. I haven’t read the other two books, and I didn’t need to. It was a seamless smooth read.

Highly recommended if you enjoy well-written character driven romance with a well-developed plot.

Author Photo--Stephanie ReidAbout the Author:
Stephanie Reid writes contemporary romances with heart, humor, and a happily ever after. She holds a master’s degree in Human Development Counseling and enjoys using counseling theories on her fictional characters (and from time to time her husband).

She draws inspiration for her stories from life experience, and when writing, she frequently asks her police officer husband for his input on all things law enforcement. They’ve agreed not to discuss the bits of advice she doesn’t take when it doesn’t serve her plots well, and this makes for a very harmonious marriage.

Born and raised in the Chicago suburbs, Stephanie now resides with her husband and three children in central Illinois.

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Review: Fallen in Love (Fallen #3.5) by Lauren Kate

Fallen in LoveTitle: Fallen in Love
Author: Lauren Kate
Series: Fallen #3.5
Rating: 3 stars
Genres: Paranormal Romance
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Blurb:
Unexpected. Unrequited. Forbidden. Eternal. Everyone has their own love story.

And in a twist of fate, four extraordinary love stories combine over the course of a romantic Valentine’s Day in Medieval England. Miles and Shelby find love where they least expect it. Roland learns a painful lesson about finding and losing love. Arianne pays the price for a love so fierce it burns. And for the first and last time, Daniel and Luce will spend a night together like none other. Lauren Kate’s Fallen in Love is filled with love stories . . . the ones everyone has been waiting for.

True love never says goodbye . . .

My Review:
This was an enjoyable enough read but it does nothing to move the plot along with the series and appears to be a pure filler to fill the gap until the final book was released. I read it primarily for Daniel and Luce’s story but it fell short of the mark for me, could have been more romantic.

Review: Scorched (Frigid #2) by Jennifer L. Armentrout

ScorchedTitle: Scorched
Author: Jennifer L. Armentrout
Series: Frigid #2
Rating: 5 stars
Genres: Contemporary Romance
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Blurb:
Sometimes life leaves a mark…

Most days, Andrea doesn’t know whether she wants to kiss Tanner or punch him in the gut. He is seriously hot, with legit bedroom eyes and that firefighter body of his, but he’s a major player, and they can’t get along for more than a handful of minutes. Until now.

Tanner knows he and Andrea have had an epic love/hate relationship for as long as he can remember, but he wants more love than hate from her. He wants her. Now. Tomorrow. But the more he gets to know her, the more it becomes obvious that Andrea has a problem. She’s teetering on the edge and every time he tries to catch her, she slips through his fingers.

Andrea’s life is spiraling out of control, and it doesn’t matter that Tanner wants to save her, because when everything falls apart and she’s speeding toward rock bottom, only she can save herself.

Sometimes life makes you work for that happily ever after…

My Review:
I think this is Jennifer’s best NA book to date. Explorations of some heavy subject matter – alcoholism, depression and anxiety. Jennifer handles it perfectly; no glossing over, no sensationalism, raw, real, gritty,so powerful. Though it was downright difficult to read at times, it’s a superb book. The power of redemption is the key takeaway for me. Tanner is one awesome dude and I love him for patiently waiting for Andrea. Another show stopper from the incredible JLA.

Review: Rapture By Lauren Kate (Fallen #4) by Lauren Kate

RaptureTitle: Rapture
Author: Lauren Kate
Series: Fallen #4
Rating: 4 stars
Genres: Paranormal Romance
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Blurb:
The sky is dark with wings . . .

And time is running out for Luce and Daniel.
In order to stop Lucifer from erasing the past, they must find the place where the Fall began. Only Luce can break the curse, and it is her choice alone that will decide all of their fates.
But as Dark Forces gather, great sacrifices will have to be made in this final, epic struggle . . .
In the fight for Luce, and for Love, who will win?
The astonishing climax to the Fallen series. Heaven can’t wait any longer.

My Review:
I’m so happy that Luce and Daniel are finally on the same page and working together as a solid partnership. However, they only have 9 days to save each other and the world.

Luce is a lot less selfish in this book and much more considerate of Daniel’s needs. She is brave, courageous and gives him the support he needs to continue the fight. Finally, she understands that she could die if this doesn’t work out though she still doesn’t take it seriously enough from a self-preservation point of view.

Luce has come back from her time travels a lot more clued-in but there are still pieces of the puzzle she must figure out. I really enjoyed the power and control that Luce exerted at the end and the whole role-reversal was a nice touch even though I expected it.

The ending was good but I would have liked to have seen more of Luce and Daniel as they reconnected. I also don’t understand how the whole Heaven vs Hell imbalance was left – it appeared like nothing changed, but wasn’t that the whole underlying issue all the way through?? Or maybe I was just confused over that, but it didn’t make a lot of sense to me. It felt like it was leading up to this big choice and then nothing changed.

The world building, pacing and writing are all good in this book and I enjoyed it.

Now that I’ve finished the entire series I have a lot of unanswered questions though that are a bit frustrating. Having reflected on it, Lauren introduced a lot of threads and then just left them hanging and I wonder why they were there at all (if not to serve to confuse and frustrate the reader.) Structural/Developmental editing was seriously lacking in my opinion.

For example:

*I don’t get Cam’s role as the other party in the non-existent love triangle. I’m intrigued by his character and I’ve already ordered the Cam book but still his character was never really developed during the series and I think that was a mistake.
*Why did she burn Trevor at the start? ( I’ve read the short and it still doesn’t answer this question though it appears to show that some demon did it and some angel/Daniel got Luce out of there in time.)
*What was the significance of the serpent necklace Cam gave her?
*Miles and the kiss? Thrown in there and then totally brushed over. It appears as if it was just inserted to give Luce and Daniel another reason to argue.
*Whole Heaven and Hell balance scenario was left hanging.
*Truce? What truce? Important one minute, inconsequential the next.
*Shelby and Daniel? I read the short and nothing happened between them so why would she lead Luce to believe it had? Makes no sense. No alignment.
*Todd – did he see the shadows before he died? Was he an angel?
*The Angels all seemed to switch sides (truce or no truce) and it was baffling.

That aside, I enjoyed the series more than I was frustrated by itand I’m looking forward to checking out the movie when it comes out this year.